Kasia thinks these two drawings have the strongest composition. They fill the canvas in a way that feels right, whilst other compositions feel disjointed and the mass of black is a square shape in the painting with no flow to the rest of the painting.
I’m surprised she picked these two tests above others. The observation thats some of the masses of black look like squares on the paper is something I hadn’t noticed before. I am asking myself whether I want the mass to sit like a block in the canvas, which would be more abstract and flat then a shape that sat in a space in a weird landscape.
I wanted to record this conversation here. It’s good to have another eye give opinions on my work.